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Post by elenamiria on Jan 27, 2008 19:44:20 GMT -5
Name;; Perice, Alanna, E Age;; Alanna is 15 Class;; Freshman Gender;; she is a girl (of course) Date of birth;; July 19 1992 Appearance;; www.alannadergan.com/db3/00225/alannadergan.com/_uimages/CopyofIMG_2933.JPGPersonality;; Is very loyal to friends and will protect them at all costs. She loves to fence and is amazingly sweet. But is very competitive, and always wants to win. History;; She was living in a luxurious home, until she learned she had magic. She lived with a very rich family with 3 sisters and 1 brother. The parents were 50, and 59 years old. They were afraid of her magic. So the started to shun her and then threw her out on the streets. She was living like a street rat until a gifted man realized she had magic and took her in. but then he died. And she was referred here. Relations;; None currently. Hobbies;; Read, Fence, Play with animals Extracurriculars;; None, I guess? Dorm Number;; 119 Please! Powers;; She can transform into any animal, also she can talk to animals, And finally Animals come to her aid when she needs help. Drawbacks;; Sometimes the animals turn against her, when transforming sometimes she gets stuck in animal form and can't get back in human form, sometimes she mistranslates what the animals say or says things she doesn't mean because she doesn't know how to talk to animals fully. Anything else;; She likes privacy
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Post by the doctor on Jan 27, 2008 20:11:59 GMT -5
Weeeelllll...little skimpy on the background and personality. Too nice and all. And only one drawback. I'll have to leave it up to Eileen, but I say work on it first. ((And have you read the Song of the Lioness quartet? Name sounds like it comes from there.))
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Post by Cassie on Jan 27, 2008 21:38:49 GMT -5
Also...Wouldn't shapeshifting have to come with some type of draw-back to make it fair? For instance, my character currently only has about five forms at the moment, and can only learn one form at a time?
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Myth
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Of course I'm insane why would I be normal?!
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Post by Myth on Jan 27, 2008 23:46:30 GMT -5
SInce shes in 119 that means she is Eris's roomie hope your fine with that.
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Post by Eileen on Jan 28, 2008 20:07:19 GMT -5
*clears throught* Alright, there are a few things (okay, one) I'd like to check with you before I approve, and a few that I would like you to do yourself. Firstly, as Myth said, if she were in dorm number 119, then she would be Eris's room-mate. Check Eris's profile, and see if that's alright with you. Then, we'd all appreciate it if you would lengthen the personality and history sections, as well as give her AT LEAST one more drawback. There is only one, and you need AT LEAST two. Approved for now, but try to edit that stuff. Thanks. ^-^
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Post by Cassie on Jan 28, 2008 20:12:54 GMT -5
*Snicker* Eileen didn't finish her post, 'Would you p' XD *Is VERY imature*
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Post by Eileen on Jan 28, 2008 20:21:30 GMT -5
Whoopsies. *goes to fix* XP Well, Cassie... Er... *tries to think of smart-aleky comment* YOUR MOM. *runs off, snickering.* ((that's what Zara, my stepsis says when she can't think of a comeback. XD ))
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Post by Cassie on Jan 28, 2008 20:24:47 GMT -5
*Gasp* SO DOES MY SISTER! Maybe they share a telepathic connection....*Squeals and faints*
Kira: o_0...*Pokes Cassie with a stick*
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Myth
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Of course I'm insane why would I be normal?!
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Post by Myth on Jan 30, 2008 19:34:22 GMT -5
My sister says that a lot like every twenty minutes theres a "Your Mom!"
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Post by elenamiria on Feb 1, 2008 16:47:52 GMT -5
Okay, sorry I haven't been on but I got grounded earlier this year so now I'm not allowed on the computers on days I have school -.- so I'll get right on editing it and yes I have read the Song of the Lioness. I love Tamora Peirces books so I just used her last name and Alanna's first name. (I love thoose books)
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